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" What I'm looking for is a personal statement full of
enthusiasm". Admissions Tutor for the University
of Manchester, Dr Gail Ashton.


basketMBA Editing Service £169.99
(up to 800 words)

Do you want a winning MBA personal statement?
Stop worrying, our editors will help you succeed.

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You have committed years of academic effort to apply for your MBA: now you need to condense all that experience and enthusiasm into one personal statement to set yourself apart. We dramatically improve your wording and adulate your accomplishments.

This service provides contact with your editor for up to seven days, and one edited draft and one revision. Our editors will spend hours fine-tuning your personal statement to improve grammar, prose, organisation and flow, and provide recommendations for further improvement.

Service breakdown:

Step One: Full Edit: Includes a complete revision and a detailed critique of your personal statement.

Step Two: Essay Development: Spend up to seven days revising and enhancing your essay with your editors suggestions in mind.

Step Three: Two revisions: E-mail your editor and receive a revised edit and critique within 72 hours.

And you get all this:

  • Unique critique – We write a brief critique to explain the adjustments and key improvements.
  • Private customer portal – After ordering, you will have access to your private customer portal where you can private message your editor instantly from any web-enabled computer.
  • Prompt delivery – To ensure we offer the highest standards of editing we allow our editors 72 hours (3 working days) to dedicate to your essay. Get Into Uni believes that a rushed edit will reduce the benefits of our service, and ultimately compromise the level of service we offer. We guarantee to return your personal statement within 72 working hours (3 working days).

English language - we ensure succinct communication

  • We sharpen your essay and create powerful content, loaded with influential keywords.
  • We will instantly communicate your qualities to busy admission officers and tailor your message to conform to academic standards for verbiage and format.
  • We build on your strengths and clearly articulate your desire, ambition, and motivations for studying your subject of choice. We ensure that your essay presents you as a proficient, credible and astute applicant.
  • We radically improve wording, punctuation, verb tense, and sentences.
  • We confirm effective communication from the writer to the reader.

Paragraph construction - we make your essay stand out

  • We check wording carefully for clarity and style, to improve paragraphs and overall style and accuracy.
  • We check paragraph construction, including separate sections - introductions and conclusions - ensuring your text is as "transparent" as possible to the reader.
  • We ensure paragraphs have "hooks" linking them to preceding and continuing paragraphs.

Flow, grammar, word choice, and passive voice - we guarantee accuracy

  • We correct all grammatical mistakes, misspelled words and fragments.
  • We cut unnecessary words, lighten overweight phrases, strengthen weak verbs, and eliminate run on sentences and clichés.
  • We check for tautologies and monotonous words or phrases.
  • We make sure that the verb is finite and agrees with the subject in both number (singular/plural) and person.

Right now, you are just moments away from working one-on-one with an Oxbridge-educated editor to get your document right! Order now.